I made a picture for you
Textured with vomit
Splattered with blood
Drizzled in sweat
Splashed with tears
I made a picture for you
Covered in feces
Stained with urine
Accented with spunk
I made a picture for you
With a hole punched in it
Burned by a fire
Torn down the middle
Spit on, walked on
Squatted on by a thousand
Diseased whores
I made a picture for you
So you could remember my life
Just the way you left it.
7 comments:
This just might be my favorite... I LOVE it :-)
I love this too, my favorite is:
I made a picture for you
With a hole punched in it
Burned by a fire
Torn down the middle
I almost cried a little... that was deep and heavy - I hope you find your happiness sometime very soon MrBriGuy! But in the meantime - keep creating beautifly profound art to keep you standing strong!
Ok I seriously just got sick reading this...under normal cicrumstances I probably would have enjoyed it!
First, I am flattered that you liked my style enough to use it yourself.
Second, I love it. It has very good symbolism... Very good!
Very heavy, but great. Doesn't really match my mood these days, but I can definitely appreciate the words. ;-)
It's beautiful poetry!
I love it!
Could you please grace my life, too?
For what you offer could be an improvement on what I have - ?!
Bless you for your uplifting lyricism :-)
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