Wednesday, September 12, 2007

I Made a Picture for You

I made a picture for you
Textured with vomit
Splattered with blood
Drizzled in sweat
Splashed with tears

I made a picture for you
Covered in feces
Stained with urine
Accented with spunk

I made a picture for you
With a hole punched in it
Burned by a fire
Torn down the middle

Spit on, walked on
Squatted on by a thousand
Diseased whores

I made a picture for you
So you could remember my life
Just the way you left it.

7 comments:

the108 said...

This just might be my favorite... I LOVE it :-)

Mags said...

I love this too, my favorite is:

I made a picture for you
With a hole punched in it
Burned by a fire
Torn down the middle

Ma said...

I almost cried a little... that was deep and heavy - I hope you find your happiness sometime very soon MrBriGuy! But in the meantime - keep creating beautifly profound art to keep you standing strong!

*Ren* said...

Ok I seriously just got sick reading this...under normal cicrumstances I probably would have enjoyed it!

Simply Jolene said...

First, I am flattered that you liked my style enough to use it yourself.

Second, I love it. It has very good symbolism... Very good!

Colette, aka Lil Sis said...

Very heavy, but great. Doesn't really match my mood these days, but I can definitely appreciate the words. ;-)

World of Ribonuff said...

It's beautiful poetry!
I love it!
Could you please grace my life, too?
For what you offer could be an improvement on what I have - ?!
Bless you for your uplifting lyricism :-)